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Michael Pollak's avatar

Proofreading brigade:

Gun on the roo[f]

“inverted chandeliers” etc got repeated.

Wonderful how well you write what you know into an imaginary world

Bugey libre's avatar

Michael,

Are you talking about his pee-pee as being imaginary?

The little thing has not benefited from the "giantification" due to the rad...

dean ferrell's avatar

please, that is

Yasha Levine's avatar

discussions about my fictional penis in the comments

al's avatar

well that was a surprise. i guess you didn't get the gary shteyngart treatment after you got here