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strong thoughts's avatar

I haven't read the earlier chapters, but I think it stands on it's own. I am an enjoyer of this enjoyment.

Peter Murphy's avatar

Sometimes I just want to say "That's really excellent writing." This is one of those times. It would make an excellent movie. (Especially the Golden Gate scenes.)

silversurfer7@protonmail.com's avatar

Transparent. A wire which carries the current of the reader’s attention with zero resistance.